Breaking the Ice - Lets get it started...

[Yuutsumi]

I am somewhat confident in my abilities...so I hope this doesn't intimidate anyone... remember to post what you like here and then give your constructive criticism in the other forum...

Intro: This is for a future Zine-Print I'm trying to get through the first issue called Marian The Axe Witch...which is about a rebellious college age witch who flies an axe instead of a broom. Will probably be more indy comics style...meaning it will deal more with character interaction than the horror violence...but horror violence is fun too...

[emaino]

This is really good, both art and story-wise. Your use of black and white is just plain awesome, and I really like Marian's design. The writing immediately sucked me in and I can't wait to see where you're going with it.

[Yuutsumi]

Sept 18, 2008 13:46:35 GMT -8 emaino said:

This is really good, both art and story-wise. Your use of black and white is just plain awesome, and I really like Marian's design. The writing immediately sucked me in and I can't wait to see where you're going with it.

Groovy Em, remember if you have any suggestions or think of how I could have "gone the extra mile" on something let me know in the Contructive Forum. Glad the story has sucked you in so far... I hope to try and achieve a bryan k. vaughn philosophy on comics to make every page count and make every chapter count...if a page doesn't cut it...throw it out.

This is my primary project at the moment...Manga-Style is one of my weaknesses so I will post those soon. I can't wait to see other peoples work.